They talk to me all so sweet
As sweet as honey and lime could be
I know it is all too hard to believe
But I also know life is all but make-belief
So while I gave them all respect
All they did was laugh at me
They thought I wont know that they will disappoint me
They thought they wont hurt me
For once I wish I wasn’t wise
For I have already caught their disguise
But how I wish they saw past those smiles
How I wish they looked behind those walls
For long I have been a helping hand
Helping people from themselves
I hope I can save that one person this time
The one very last on the list all the time.
As sweet as honey and lime could be
I know it is all too hard to believe
But I also know life is all but make-belief
So while I gave them all respect
All they did was laugh at me
They thought I wont know that they will disappoint me
They thought they wont hurt me
For once I wish I wasn’t wise
For I have already caught their disguise
But how I wish they saw past those smiles
How I wish they looked behind those walls
For long I have been a helping hand
Helping people from themselves
I hope I can save that one person this time
The one very last on the list all the time.
posted by curious | 10:01 PM
39 Comments:
gaurav
boy oh boy! it sure feels great to get a comment as soon as a new post is posted.Thanks for those encouraging words.
if u liked this one i am sure u will like this post of mine too
http://curiously-me.blogspot.com/2006/04/wonder-why.html
Thanks for your visit to my rants...
Good thing u have going on here, but i have a q....
Y is all the poetry that i see in the blogosphere soo melancholic????
Hey...Very genuiene and it hurts no limits when you played by rules and then realised tht it was a farce value....Well assembled poem!:)
Hey..Me still in Atl...Did read tht u r up in TN...:) I guess u read the date on Keshis blog as she is the only one who knows or rather knew...I love meeting Cancerians...:)
the last one on the list...is it u?
great post
scribblez:
Atlanta is a wonderful place.I come there once in 3-4 mnths for geo-cluster meets.
have a great loooong weekend!
maya:
guessed it right!well what else can i say.
have a great weekend!
I feel this yaar ... I'm in the same boat too ... Hurts real bad especially when 'close friends' stick that knife in ur back ... its not the back that hurts ... its the heart ... that's crushed ...
Hope u help urself or find a gem of a person to be a true friend ...
but remember that what u have sowed will come back ... u have sowed goodness and so u will receive good ... trust me ... it will happen ...
nice one :-)
Hi! :)
Nice work here.
Thanks for visiting my blog. Well, what else can I say but cheers!
:)
Hi there..
Thanx for your visit and comment in my space...
Am sure its bad and we all have gone thru this when we get hit unpleasantly at the back by the ones we least expect it from..ie.friends..but we all learn through these experience...it hurts..but its a great learning...aint it?
Take care...
hi curious
long time.
poems are not my work area, but i like this line "For once I wish I wasn’t wise" . and i think u know the reason why i liked this line.
anup:
:)thnx...am just clinging on to that four letter word called HOPE...
endevour me:
thanks...:)
Pradeep K
thanks...:)
seema:
experiences such as these r just too much to handle...hope i learn something from it.
Voice:
Welcome back! where were u hibernating all these months??
*For once I wish I wasn’t wise
For I have already caught their disguise
But how I wish they saw past those smiles
How I wish they looked behind those walls*
Loved these lines...vey touching!
indeed, at some time, we should give some respect and dignity to ourselves too.
We should fight for ourself and not let the fighter insider us die.
We have a right to live a life of respect and peace and for the sake of other, we should not let it down, ever.
-ATG
Hey...dont worry..they just are a part n parcel of learning the hard way in life and we all do it, cauz otherwise i guess we never learn..so dont get hassled, your not the only one !!! take care and now that it is behind you...march right ahead !
Must say its really very well written
Well its good but too depressing...makes one think whats haunting u?
Hope you rise above the disguise, the false smiles, and the walls to kindle your own self..
:)
..Me
Best thing -->
Fountain Head & Atlas Shrugged - By Ayn Rand
hey how you doing now?hope you're good!I just got back home from a small vacation.:)
Wht do u do when to come to Atl....i am so very bored n go elsewhere as I dont find anythihng here...When u come here next time do give me a shout..Maybe we can meet :)
Hey buddy! ... long time no update? ... Hope things have become much better now ....
well written. njoid this one :)
You never Stop To amaze. Well written, Just that you should be more frequent so that we can enjoy ur posts.
Sam
hey girl!i just took 'devil wears prada'...thinking of watching it tomorrow :) did you like it?
niceee...me like!:)
Happy Friendship day!
***I hope I can save that one person this time
The one very last on the list all the time.
Very sweet line... dunno why but really touched me!!!
Nice one!
Hi Curious,
long time no new post.. missing ur posts.. take care.. ciao :)
I enjoyed the movie :)
Really beautiful.. specially the last two lines!
really liked it:)
Beautifully put.
That last person on the list deserves to be saved!
Where are you no updates in 3 months!
Liked the ending very much
had a feeling. was it abt fellow bloggers ? :)
well rhymed
liked it
Amen to this .Btw what inspired you to write this ?
Very cool design! Useful information. Go on! Kid christmas bingo Mexican pharmacy online oxycodone play keno online credit report
Hey.. Have a story to share, without worrying about revealing urself ?.. Tell it to the virtual world... let the world know your story but not your identity. :) http://www.project71.com/readme Enjoyy!
Post a Comment
<< Home